A lyric i wrote

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WRONG:

So here she goes breaking loos and doing thing's her way
You cant hold her back and you can't make her stay
She wont listen to you, she only does what she wanna do
If you thought you could hold her fold her and control her
You betther sitt down and think again, think you were wrong
Very wrong

Every night she is out having a party having her way
She won't listen, she's done with that
Done taking commands, done doing things for you
She does things she wanna do, she's doing things her way
So hey, you betther make way, she's comming trough
She does no longer do thing's to please you
If that's what you think you betther think again, think you were wrong
Very wrong

Wrong
You were wrong
Thinking she would continue to do
Thing's not for herself but only for you
Wrong
You were wrong
Thinking she was happy that way
Thinking she would smile and stay
Wrong
You were wrong
Saying "She's mine"
She does not belong to you
You found that out with time
You bether be strong
She's gone
You were wrong

Hanging with your friends
Thinking youre cool
Thinking you are the one that makes the rules
She's got news for you
You're trough
She's out and done with you
Keeping her at home
With nothing to do, and not even the smallest sign of love from you
She were not wrong, it was you
She's out
Wrong
You were wrong

No chance
No chance
You ain't got a chance
To get her back
You blew it, now you crack
She got back at you
Now she's gone, ain't coming back
You did
Wrong
You were....

eh I was expecting some sick battle rhymestaking dudes under me and a few gunners turn cats to cucumbers

I think that is pretty cool honey..

Hey I think it was really good. I liked it, you should keep writing, you seem to be good at it.

Very nice! I think there's really something of you inside this song (a bad experience unfortunately). But the lyrics are really good!

Thanks...and HI helms and amz and all you other guys...Ive been in hospital for some time now...Do you realy think it's a thing i should keep doing?..I got some more if you wanna read..many hello's from the norwegian guy (D@rkness)

( here is another lyric i wrote..i think it is kinda good)IN THE COLD RAIN:The rainOn her faceDripping down Like a warm embraceThe rainOn her skinTrying to get troughTrying to get inSoaking trough her clothesSoaking troughThe rain On her lipsOn her fingertipsOn those beautyfull lipsBathing themWashing themAs she shivers in the cold rainThe rainIn her hairShe looks good like thisDripping downRuning down her neckMaking rivers on her skinOh how i want to hold herTo kiss her To warm herAs she stands thereIn the cold rainThis wet look Fits herFits her goodThe rain follows the linesOf her bodyJust like it shouldBut the rainCant touch her eyesHer eyes is dryThose beautyfull eyesAnd as the rainMakes love to her bodyMakes love to her skinHer eyes makes love to mineAs we stand there, in the cold rain

Hi..i will use this space here to post lyric's that i come up with, so if you guy's could give me some response..good or bad ( Not mean) than that would be swell