Original Poetry

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Puppet No longer your puppetCut the strings you felt so vitalTears dripNo more toy to play withNo longer your puppetFree from your grip of emotionLet tears drip for nowNo more toy to play withNo longer your puppetI can now move onI do have one regretI’m no more your toy to play with

Mind in Wonderland Look to the PastThe laughs we hadThe thoughts we sharedEverythingMy mind is in wonderlandRemember when you criedI was there to wipe them awayRemember when you laughedI laughed alongRemember when you were tiredI offered my warmthRemember when you had something to sayI was there to listenRemember when you smiledIt made me happyThe thoughts flow like riverMy wonderland is brokenBack to real life nowFind myself aloneSomeday, I will be foundSomeday, I will find;Myself not alone

Very much like my own poetry at the moment. I think I understand you more through that then your normal posting. I feel your pain man, and things can only get better from now. Best of luck in your endeavors!-Hyp

Beneath Worlds You told me I couldn’t save the worldI agreed with a nodLittle did I know how true that wasMy God, how trueI took your world and placed it on my shouldersBeing the supportWhen my knees felt they were to buckleI realized I needed to save myselfYour world was tossed to the unknownAnd here I am lonelyBut at least I’m hereWith the realization that life is worth livingLet me gather my strengthIt may take some timeI need to be able to hold my own worldBefore I hold anyone else’sWhen my strength is gatheredRetuned, refinedLet me place your world upon my shouldersIn enduring condition that will last throughout time

Hey Hyperion,
Why don't you share your poetry with us. For me, poetry has been a great way to release my feelings, and I forgot about that until tonight when my friend showed his works to me. A person can find out a lot by words of poetry because it's pure feeling. I know you've had a hard time yourself, and I hope things turn out well. Thanks for the support, it really helps.

Here's one I thought I'd share with you guys: When Tomorrow Starts Without MeWhen tomorrow starts without me,And I'm not there to see;If the sun should rise and find your eyesAll filled with tears for me;I wish so much you wouldn't cryThe way you did today,While thinking of the many things,We didn't get to say.I know how much you love me,As much as I love you,And each time that you think of me,I know you'll miss me too;But when tomorrow starts without me,Please try to understand,That an angel came and called my name,And took me by the hand,And said my place was ready,In heaven far above,And that I'd have to leave behindAll those I dearly love.But as I turned to walk away,A tear fell from my eye,For all my life, I'd always thought,I didn't want to die.I had so much to live for,So much yet to do,It seemed almost impossible,That I was leaving you.I thought of all the yesterdays,The good ones and the bad,I thought of all the love we shared,And all the fun we had.If I could relive yesterday,Just even for awhile,I'd say goodbye and kiss youAnd maybe see you smile.But then I fully realized,That this could never be,For emptiness and memories,Would take the place of me.And when I thought of worldly things,I might miss come tomorrow,I thought of you, and when I did,My heart was filled with sorrow.But when I walked through heaven's gates,I felt so much at home.When God looked down and smiled at me,From His great golden throne,He said "This is eternity,And all I've promised you."Today for life on earth is past,But here it starts anew.I promise no tomorrow,But today will always last,And since each day's the same dayThere's no longing for the past.But you have been so faithful,So trusting and so true.Thought there were times you did some things,You knew you shouldn't do.But you have been forgivenAnd now at last you're free.So won't you take my handAnd share my life with me?So when tomorrow starts without me,Don't think we're far apart,For every time you think of me,I'm right here, in your heart.

Loved it man. Very good.

Contemplation During my darkest timeYou ran awayWhy?When I needed you mostYou left me behindWhy?When all it took was timeYou gave up on meWhy?During your darkest timeI stood by your sideFor as long as I could endureWhen you needed me mostI was thereAll feelings asideWhen all it took was timeI was patientUntil I desperately needed five

wow, that was truely amazing, so good. you a very good poet hun, well done. wow

Here's one I wrote a year and a half ago: In Vain The guilt rushes over him As if he were flirting with a tsunami It chokes him and makes him weak Building up in his throat Until he's too diluted to do this He collapses on the table Trying to conceal the tears Within his jacket A downpour onto his white, sulken face Only makes him more lethargic Shivering from the consequences that may come from this But it doesn't matter, she doesn't care Is this guilt all in vain?

I can relate to that a lot. Shared Emptiness The pain in your eyes I saw that nightThat image will never leave meThen the sun rose and I ignored itMy world is emptyUnderstand the pain I share with youOur hearts both grievingRemember our hearts are separateInstead of intwined we're growingIn time I hope you thank mewhat I did was for the both of usUntil then, my world will be...A little more empty

03-03-04

I thought what we had ment something to you.
That I really could place my trust in you.
I thought that "I love you" ment something.
Please answer me this: Why'd you have to do this to me?
What about all those time you said, "Sure, I'd save my babe"?
Is everything null and void now?
I need you, I was there when you needed me, why can't you be here now?
I thought you'd have the decency to do this to my face.
Can't you see I'm hurting?
You just keep pouring the salt on my wounds.
Do you want me to hate you now?

Much love to you flawedperfection. Much love.

Short and yet powerful Forging Rage Isn't it funny how dark times creepUnknowingly they jump on youIt's like a knife that stabs deepFall to the ground I feel to weepBut now isn’t the timeI must fight all against defeat!!!

I dont write poetry, but i have written something today. Why Theres evil inside himIts never at bayHe masks that evil with a fake smile on his face.But its always thereit never goes away.Will there ever be another happy day?He uses those wordsTo cut deep and to hurtHe watches me weep As he secretly reepsAs i lay there wishing him Gone and awayI dream that happiness will come again One dayAll i have is one question to ask,Is why? Why,why do i staywith all that evil, that will never go away?

yikes!?! That was....good?!? I'm sorry you still feel this way, Dawn. I hope you can turn things around in your life, and stop being controlled by someone elses issues. Good Luck and keep your head up. Happiness is really just around the corner at any given time.

I wrote this 6 months ago yesterday. Lullaby Hush, my child everything’s alright;I’m here now.Dry your bloodstained tears on my arm;I’ll kiss your sorrows away.No need to worry;I’ll chase all your fears ‘till they don’t come ‘round here no more.Come, my child, rest in my arms;I’m singing your lullaby.I’ll tuck you in, tell you how everything will work out;I’ll be with you no matter what.If the world comes tumbling down tomorrow,I’ll hold your hand and we’ll watch it crumble to our feet.

Today for Smile There's more to lifeThan there is to sayTake a secondSmile todayWhen dark clouds cover and stayLet there be lightSmile todayIf times get roughAnd the mind is tiredDon't be afraidSmile today

Thanks Sexpert. I am ashamed that i am still in the situation.I cant get out, i just cant get out.IM stuckI have no one or nowhere to go.This is my sad little life.

Writing poetry really helps me a lot. That's why I keep writing now. So far, I think all of the poems that were submitted are very good.Keep your chin up babe.