I'm in the writting mood so heres another -- "Fear, Your Gateway" (March 16, 2004)Fear can be seenAs a new beginingWhat once hinderedIs now available.New doors are wider than expectedBut reluctantcy pulls you back.As we stride forward a new light is flashedNot red nor yellowbut green telling us to go.The forward pushcounteracts the endlessly pullBut once hope developes nothing stops this achievementNot even pitiful sorrow.
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Original Poetry
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It's good to see that positivity, stu!
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March 17, 2004 I wish I could see myself through your eyesTo see if all you said were lies.It's sad really, to think that everything true is a lieAnd in turn think every lie is true.I wish I could say that I don't need you...that I don't want youBut you've beat it in me till I was black, until I was blue.You're always running away from conflict, does that make you a man?Nay, you are but a lost boy who can't think to cope with a simple plan.Since when does maturity involve breaking promises and deceit?I may be younger but at least I admit defeat.I will never bow down afore your temple.
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I relate to ur poem from both perspectives being that person and being pissed by that person. ITs good! (not being one of those people and vice vera but ur poem lol)
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Thank you. I like your poetry as well. =)
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IMO, that's your best one yet.
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Always There They never go awayWhen person thought passesAngels here to stayProtecting all massesBut remember there are special onesThose that never forgetLike fathers, mothers, daughters, sonsThose you have more than metDon't weep timelesslyIt's only a temporary good-byeThe light will come and you will seeThey were always there for you; they didn't lie
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Short Wrath Feel thy wrathMind is stronger than the heartBend it to my willFeel thy wrath
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I like my most recent also and I love your Always There, Web.
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Thank you sweetie.
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Anytime.
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In reply to:Always There They never go awayWhen person thought passesAngels here to stayProtecting all massesBut remember there are special onesThose that never forgetLike fathers, mothers, daughters, sonsThose you have more than metDon't weep timelesslyIt's only a temporary good-byeThe light will come and you will seeThey were always there for you; they didn't lie I love it Web. Thank you.
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It's good to know that my poetry helps people. You're very welcome Dawn. I really hope things get better for you.
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Fade She loves mebut she cannot seethe demon alive insideHer hopes her dreamsshe sees in mewhile all my own hope diesWhat can I doWhat can I sayWhen she sits and criesI warned herI told herDon't fall in love with meBut she didAnd I have fallen in love with herNow where are wecan't you see?The deamon is still thereIt has consumed meas it will youand it is for you I fearunderneath our loveis a darkness growing deepWhy can't you see?
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Wow, I completely relate to you, Blueglass. Keep up the good work.
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And I to you, FlawedPerfection. Thank you. I think I have found a place here among you and websexinfo.I can relate to you people.
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I enjoy your poetry. I'm sure you can relate to a lot of others on this board also. Similar experiences tend to reach many people. Stick around.
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I'm really good at making a girl feel like she's better than life itself, but I've never done it through a poem.
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I have. :grin:
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thats just what makes u special isn't it websex?