Original Poetry

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Everyone is gifted here. Mines bad but I'll post anyway.I was so naïve to thinkThat you genuinely loved me tooIt was gone in one quivering blinkYour love proved to be untrueOn this cliff up highOn these rocks I lieStaring at the ocean belowWatch the currents and sand begin to sewSometimes I still wonder what could have been between usSometimes I still cry despite there being no more fussSometimes I swear I can still feel your presence next to meYour sweet angelic tone, you still control meI’d die to break these chains of youI swear I wish we never metBut sometimes, despite myselfI still feel like a wreckRevisiting everywhere we used to go,Now I’m there aloneIt looks different nowBut I know it’s the same place, somehowI wonder if you ever look back into your summerRemember how we were awkward midnight lovers?You told me you’d love me until the end and then someWhat happened, my love, is it the end?Is it the end and then some?If only I could understand myself enoughTo know that you genuinely didn’t give a f--k.

Wow! Really dug reading that.

In reply to:Wow! Really dug reading that. Me too. That was profound.

any happy poems on here?

There are a couple, you just gotta look around.

wow web, yours are amazing!!!

Thanks. Most of them inspired by one girl, isn't it crazy?

they are just amazing, sorry if I repeat myself but they really are! (especially "to the living end".. wow!)

those are all quite goodhere is one i have already posted once, it seems it'd fit in here real well- not the quite the same type of poem, but its a little different and i like itBecause we’re not in High School forever,We should make the most of it and neverPass up the opportunity to really get to know someone,To be with them and to have some fun.As the artist Eminem once said in rhyme, “This opportunity only comes once in a lifetime.”He’s right, you know, you don’t get many of those kinds of gifts,I know I don’t want my life to be filled with “what ifs.”btw, so many sad poems in here, its easiest to write when you're sad but i'd really like to hear some happier poems

Ive been writing poetry for years, this is one of my newer ones, wrote it about 5 days ago, hope you enjoy it. I'll post more of my poems here, because i love getting feedback on them.Walk With MeWalk with me, the path of life,to explore every bend of the roadEnjoy with me the beauty of life,along its wonderful wayFind comfort with me, in each other's arms,when grief crosses our pathFind strength with me, in each other's strength,when despair lies in waitLaugh with me, a single true laugh,to enlighten another's distressCry with me, a single true tear,to understand true happinessCherish with me, the wonders of life,as they need to be preservedRejoice with me, in the mysteries,of what is yet to beFind peace with me, in each other's souls,when the world has gone insaneFind love with me, in each other's hearts,until this life has been fulfilledAnd when the path comes to an endI hope we can say from withinWe've known the beauty of true love,our love came from within