so what do you guys think of my poems (the ones at top)? Do you think they are worth writing more and publishing? I can write these for hours, days, weeks.
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YaY
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Walken you have a rare talent for being able to put feelings into words - I loved the poems - I write a lot, but have never been able to do a poem, or a short story for that matter, its like i can never find the one word to replace the hundreds - hmm did that make sense - hell I am wafflin on this morning Walken LOVED them, keep em coming
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Thank you. I just write how those around me make me feel. I often question whether Aeronautical Engineering is the field for me. I am damn good at math, good with computers, good with poems and proverbs, and I am athletic. I just seem to be too good at too many things.
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" I just seem to be too good at too many things. "yeah I suffer from that curse too..........actually no i don't
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sorry. did not mean in it in that way.Talentless BeautySitting freely across the roomEyes of fire Hair of poisonSits the talentless beautyWalking through the doors of timeDoorhandle of utter failureHinges of hate, searing in your brainWalks the talentless beautyIncapacitated at the deskSmiling at the giberishLooking cleanly through all the smokeThe god the talentless beauty is
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Walken - i know you didn't mean it that way hon, Im kinda down today thats all, and its so unlike me, I can't handle it LOL
Talentless beauty - you trying to tell me somat - JOKE by the way...........it was, again, wonderful Walken, thanks for sharing them with us all :smile: -
I write poetry to make people feel better. In reply to: The god the talentless beauty is Showing that talent is not needed to be great.
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Frankly, I don't really get poetry so I'm the last person to ask if It's good or not. Sometimes, it seems that the quality of art is directly related to wether or not someone will buy it.Jackson Pollack comes to mind. I mean I can get hammered and spill paint (I have done) but would anyone buy it? I really don't know.I mean absolutely no office to the artists in the crowd, like I said, I just don't get it. Know what I mean?I would say that if you can cause an emotional reaction, then you have talent!! If you can cause ME to have an emotional reaction, then you can probably move mountains.
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oh, I do actually like the poems, but what do I know