Some Love

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I made this poem b/c I have been an ass to a lot of people, but I found that is b/c of the bnreak up I went through. I am sorry to everyone I have made angry, but I love you all. But recently I have found a girl that I am gonna hang out with as a friend, but she has changed my outlook. So I put this together for everyone.Rebirth of LoveThe volcanoes erupt, spweing hateCoating all that was once goodAll life and love dies and is hiddenThe rains come and washes the ground clearRebirth of LoveLove sprouts through the cracksThe Lava splits as the heart beats againTrees of hope sprout up into the skyThe air turns clear and warmRebirth of LoveWalking the path of death to lifeI find you, the one who was hiddenI reach out my handBreaking the barrier of denialThe wonder of the rebirth of loveJonathan Petkevichhope you guys like it

Thanks Walken. Growth is a cool thing.

it sure is. I have done a lot, and we could all use a lot.

loved it walken

pretty good xcept for the fact that its got no rhyme and you abuse the word :" sprout

rhyming is child play...I thought it was great

That was very pretty Walken. Glad to see you happy again.

In reply to: pretty good xcept for the fact that its got no rhyme and you abuse the word :" sprout You have bad grammer and lousy usage of punctuation, and you're critiquing poetry?Stick to your homework.

Thats a very good poem. Good work

Great poem Walken! I've been checking out some of your other work! I like the happy ones

Thank you everyone. That one is for you all.

It`s called "grammar" , dumbfuck

Hey Ghost I wanted to be nice, but fuck off. What is wrong with you. Poetry does not need to ryhme and it can be a giant paragraph. It is simply a way of expressing your feelings, emotions, and thoughts. I guess you have been tear gassed too many times to pay attention in English.

Shouldn`t "What is wrong with you" have a question mark at the end ?

Wow nit-picking on grammar. Tough guy, eh? Just take your zit face and use the oil to make some french fries, and take your insolance elsewhere because you are worthless.

You go man! Just remember too many of us love your work, don't let one jack off ruin that joy. :wink:

It shouldn't not shouldn`t...

thank you ranger....much love.

Are you dumb ?Walken you little artist, you like entertaining people don`t you ? ... little muppet

ghost i wrote that for the people on this thread and if you are gonna be a dick head about it take it elsewhere. Just because you are incapable of expressing yourself witout looking like an ass I suggest you keep those fingers away from the keyboard and keep your mouth shut. Do not even think you can call Pink Ranger dumb. You are a total worthless piece of crap. So have fun being a dick and a total retard, dipshit.