My beautiful Alyssa, Do you ever wonder when n how we first fell in love? I must've swept you off your feet and you suddenly fell into my arms. Or maybe i fell into yours, but i was too heavy so you dropped me n I'm STILL fallin' for you. You're just so wonderful and beautiful that i couldn't help but fall in love with you. What we have (I'm sure it's been said by many, but...) is indescribable. =] Girl, even wikipedia doesn't have a definition or anything about our love. Haha. I LOVE YOU. And that's a fact. The realest thing you will EVER hear.
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Dear Alyssa
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Does Alyssa read this forum or are you asking for a critique or just trying to get up the courage to send it or just so happy you want to share your love for her with the world?
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lol is that good? critique plz ha i wanna send it
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I would get rid of everything after "indescribable" and spend more time telling her exactly what you think is so wonderful and beautiful about her. Give examples and be more specific with those two lines of thought.Added: Also, you might want to spend some time telling her about how your great as a couple.Are you going for sappy romance or cute or what? Right now it reads like both and in my opinion they don't mix well.There, my critique.
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Hold the phone. Please tell me Alyssa isn't the same girl who cheated on you with her ex, is it?? The same girl who convinced you that love is fake?
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I don't think either is healthy?
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sure it is, falling hard and fast is the fun of life.
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ehh... yah it is the same girl that cheated on me 3 weeks ago after we went out for 1 and 1/2 years...i sent her that today no response lol, and i texted her 1x today, i really idk? i feel like its hopeless
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Originally Posted By: Virtual_StarHold the phone. Please tell me Alyssa isn't the same girl who cheated on you with her ex, is it?? The same girl who convinced you that love is fake? yup yup... same 1
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Dude, why are you doing this to yourself?
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i dont understand what the hell is wrong with me!! im fucking going insane i think seriously! how can i be like this i dont understand i, swear i cant freaking help it, its driving me crazy
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What you need to do is find something to keep you busy. As long as you're busy, you won't have time to think about some chick that doesn't even like you.Go volunteer at some local place if you have to, just try to keep yourself busy.