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I am now on poetry.com...I am putting all my poems up.

Good for you! From what I've heard, they're pretty damn good!!!

here i will post the ones I have there here:
Unknown of Fear

Fear is the essence of the unknown
nervousness is the fear of knowing the unknown
when you feel nervous reach out
my hand will reach back
I will guide you through the unknown
hold you close

We will discover the unknown together
for no one should do it on their own

Jonathan Petkevich

Solid Earth Falls

Times when a man has had their legs pulled out
From underneath him
That the true test of strength is given
It is when the blinds are removed
You are blinded
Your true test as a person begins
It is when you grow
You realize you were a better person all along

As the Earth falls from under you
You stand steadfast into the wind
You know that nothing
Can take you down
Bring you down
From your pedastal
It is your time to be strong

Jonathan Petkevich

The Struggle, Life Eternal

In times of great adversity
Those who strive to be the strongest
May survive
Those who remain constant and headstrong
Will survive
In times of tests
Those who strive to do the best
May do well
Those who can remain strong
And put forth their all willing effort
They will prevail

Jonathan Petkevich

Essentially Love

The one true day where all people are to bind
together and get each other wonderful things
showing how we feel about each other. I buy no
gifts for I am the man who gives all, but I
only give love, and that is what this day is
truly about. I spread my love around, but to
focus my love is truly a beautiful thing. Love
has so much meaning. Never let someone that
you care about, deeply, out of your sights, for
you never know if that person could turn out
to be your next true love.

Jonathan Worthngton Petkevich

there are the ones that are up, I really love my titles and i tried to make the poems just as creative.

well what do you think?

I love them!!!I hate people like you, people who can express themselves in written (or any other) form. I always let things build up cause I can't express them in anyway.Back to the point, I love them!!!You've got a real talent there John!

hahaha...thank you

nice but what ever happened to "high art"?There once was a man from Nantucket.....Now That's poetry!

no no no no noThere once was a man named Dan TuckerAnd he was in love with a hooker...I forget how it goes from there, something about being able to fuck her...

see what I mean?the shit's gotta rhyme!!!!

no, that is a common misconception. Some of the most famous and strongest poetry does not ryhme at all.

what, may I ask, is more famous than the man from Nantucket?!

All of Gary Frost.

BATTLE OF THE FROSTSGary -V- RobertLets get it on!!!!!!

yeah...thanks for pointing that outI posted and was like i could fix it, but i am too lazy.

In reply to: Gary -V- Robert don't forget JackWalken, dude you know I'm messin wit ya, right?

did i get you good?

I just didn't want to become the subject of a dark, brooding poem

hahaha too late...no joking HAHAHA

well, I may not be from Nantucket, however....

a smelly little rat from a bucket
once said fuck it
and got kicked in the face because of it
then he went and got lit

dunno pulled that from somewhere...my own creation