Original Poetry

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i found the poet's page lol....the other night i wrote this one. yeah i was feeling shitty life or hellI stand out in the morning grass, feeling the morning due in beteween my toes.watching the fog as it hides the road.In my mind i wonder, Am I dead, and this is hell.Is this my chamber in hell that seem to be lifeMy chamber that seems so real, Tricked ot believeing I am alive but i'm not. I'm in my chamber of hell, never will i be free.the pain keeps raging in me, the hurt burns at me, the thoughts keep hunting me. I have died, or was murdered before my first breaths. Is this my chamber in hell that seem to be lifeMy chamber that seems so real, Tricked ot believeing I am alive but i'm not. I'm in my chamber of hell, never will i be free.I sit at my window and watch the night sky, The darkness is lit buy a string of bright light. That lightning seemed so real, the sound of the thunder hurt my ears. It's just a cover up. In my mind i wonder, Am I dead, and this is hell.Is this my chamber in hell that seem to be life.My chamber that seems so real, Tricked to believeing I am alive but i'm not. I'm in my chamber of hell, never will i be free.the pain keeps raging in me, the hurt burns at me, the thoughts keep hunting me. i'll never be freed.

i couldn't rememeber what the fourm was called so i justput that instead of Original Poetry.don't ask my why i didn't look at the top of the screen.....lol i was zoned. (not thinking)

"Throw Away All The Happiness"I want to die but theres no way outForelorn love in its final boutHow can I let goWhat the fuck, dont I know?Gunna give up on my looksFuck acidemics, I'm closing all my booksHow can I let goWhat the fuck, dont I know?I just don't have any undestanding I think I will stop caring!How can I let goWhat the fuck, dont I know?It seemed at first like a jokeI forgot how to cry so I think I'll just chokeHow can I let goWhat the fuck, dont I know?My love hasn't changed...Though my feelings have been re-arranged. I wrote that song about Megan, I was really upset when she told me she doesnt wana be friends with me. Sorry about all the F-bombs.

"A Crappy Love Poem"I try to hint aroundUp you when you are downCan't you see what I'm trying to be?I try to get you happyInstead of being downFrowns look bad on you...I love to listenI try to imagineSill you don't realize?I think about you all the timeAll the time you are on my mindAre you getting closer?Everytime we talkI feel like nothing elseAre the blurs making sense now?Help, I have fallen!I have no way of recoveringThis fall, is me in love with you...This one is about Megan's ignorance towards my feelings...She has yet to see this peice; I like to keep my works private.

Jedi VS PiratesWith a flickOf the saber;I see naughtAround him,Ever More, shaltHe who hath betrayed Luke Skywalker,Never die in peace.

To The Living EndIn the time of your demiseI realized I'd probably cryI'm sorry for all the harm I've doneI'm sorry for making funIt's just that I was scared of painSomething you did to me like it was just a gameI know I can never forget but I can forgiveLet's go back to the day we met when we knew how to liveBack when we were both naive to this cruel worldBack when I once knew you as an innocent girlThe days of innocent play and pleasuresThe days I will always treasureLet's bring those days back to the presentAnd let my heart be a lessonDon't grow dark when you can shine brightShowing others the path with a brilliant lightI know in my demise I will stay trueI know in my demise I will think of youAnd when my life flashes before my eyesI will leave in happiness because I saw you before I diedFor Amber

Thats awesome Web.!

The Weak Escape and The Strong Return My love for you will disappearI will flee and go awayEach step draws a tearYet it becomes easier day by dayI ran from the pastForward and didn't look backI never ran so fastYou did expect me to crackIn the dark I struggled for lightIt's blocked away by thoughts of youArmed with nothing but my mightInstead of dissolve I grewI return from my escapeYou're barely hanging onIs this fateOr result of my being goneTake my hand I extend at lengthI survived you despite all at stakeNow I'll show you my newfound strengthFor this stength I have you to thank

Everyone is gifted here. Mines bad but I'll post anyway.I was so naïve to thinkThat you genuinely loved me tooIt was gone in one quivering blinkYour love proved to be untrueOn this cliff up highOn these rocks I lieStaring at the ocean belowWatch the currents and sand begin to sewSometimes I still wonder what could have been between usSometimes I still cry despite there being no more fussSometimes I swear I can still feel your presence next to meYour sweet angelic tone, you still control meI’d die to break these chains of youI swear I wish we never metBut sometimes, despite myselfI still feel like a wreckRevisiting everywhere we used to go,Now I’m there aloneIt looks different nowBut I know it’s the same place, somehowI wonder if you ever look back into your summerRemember how we were awkward midnight lovers?You told me you’d love me until the end and then someWhat happened, my love, is it the end?Is it the end and then some?If only I could understand myself enoughTo know that you genuinely didn’t give a f--k.

Wow! Really dug reading that.

In reply to:Wow! Really dug reading that. Me too. That was profound.

any happy poems on here?

There are a couple, you just gotta look around.

wow web, yours are amazing!!!

Thanks. Most of them inspired by one girl, isn't it crazy?

they are just amazing, sorry if I repeat myself but they really are! (especially "to the living end".. wow!)

those are all quite goodhere is one i have already posted once, it seems it'd fit in here real well- not the quite the same type of poem, but its a little different and i like itBecause we’re not in High School forever,We should make the most of it and neverPass up the opportunity to really get to know someone,To be with them and to have some fun.As the artist Eminem once said in rhyme, “This opportunity only comes once in a lifetime.”He’s right, you know, you don’t get many of those kinds of gifts,I know I don’t want my life to be filled with “what ifs.”btw, so many sad poems in here, its easiest to write when you're sad but i'd really like to hear some happier poems

Ive been writing poetry for years, this is one of my newer ones, wrote it about 5 days ago, hope you enjoy it. I'll post more of my poems here, because i love getting feedback on them.Walk With MeWalk with me, the path of life,to explore every bend of the roadEnjoy with me the beauty of life,along its wonderful wayFind comfort with me, in each other's arms,when grief crosses our pathFind strength with me, in each other's strength,when despair lies in waitLaugh with me, a single true laugh,to enlighten another's distressCry with me, a single true tear,to understand true happinessCherish with me, the wonders of life,as they need to be preservedRejoice with me, in the mysteries,of what is yet to beFind peace with me, in each other's souls,when the world has gone insaneFind love with me, in each other's hearts,until this life has been fulfilledAnd when the path comes to an endI hope we can say from withinWe've known the beauty of true love,our love came from within