Poetry/Writing
It seems like the only times I truly feel like myself is when I write. When I can scratch a pen across a piece of paper, dripping my thoughts across something, immortalizing my own words in ink, I feel free. When I have a keyboard beneath my fingertips, spreading my opinions across a screen without fear of being judged by them, I feel free.
I love writing stories and poetry, and I was just wondering if there was anyone else who shared that passion.
I have been considering making a topic like this for a while. I'll go ahead and post some of my work. Just gimmie a minute to find it XD*edithere you goSpinning, whirling, twirlingLeft and right they go.Like a drift of snow.Thoughts abound.Muscles tighten,Tensions highten,Leaving me frightened.Don't want to be blightened.I feel so sore as I ponder.Are you a friend or a whore?My friend or my whore?Or maybe something more?I feel my insides binding.My soul and flesh grinding.The clock downward windingWhat should I be finding?So now.. Left and right.Spinning, whirling, twirling,I bow and off like the snow.We go.
Ive only written one poem.. and were the first to read it.. and one of the few
I think that it was an absolutely wonderful poem sweetie; it really captured your emotions, you should be proud of your work :smile:
thanks hun:)
May I ask what was the inspiration for your work?
A dance and a relationship that was really wierd. It was my first major crush. She sorta let me lead myself on =/.
My writing makes me sound much more emotional then I really am.
I have more if you care to see it.
That'd be lovely.Let me find something, and I'll show you some of mine
I have - it's like my joints are no longer drawn from the fingers of scoiety and I get to create my own world when I write, making my own universe that I get to watch over and control and be the fate of it. I've tried writing poetry before, but I know I'm definitely not considered "above average" at it, so I stick to what I like to write - stories.
It is just that wonderful feeling of not going to be judged that makes some people feel so liberated, doesn't it?
You have made me bleed.You cut me deep.You think your all I need.But, I can't pretend I care.Your emotionless smile I can't read.I breath this abuse like air.This abuse I grew to love.My hair and body stained red by blood.This abuse I rise above.I've grown to take it.I have grown to love it.So now its my turn.I am now beyond you.Enjoy this chance to learn.Never again.I won't let it continue.The violence fetish innuendo.You suffer now.And I know now.That my soul is free to go.Away from you.Away from this place.I no longer bear a countance for your grace. this is one I favor. I can't stand some of my poems. I keep them as a reminder of my weakness.. this one.. I actually like. its one of the like 3 I like out of like 12 >.<However I can't say I think any of my work is really good.
I love it! When I'm writing, I'm in control. I am able to release all my emotions and I'm not afraid. It's almost like a drug lol
I've always wanted to be able to write down, well, anything... but I just can't do it.> immortalizing my own words in inkThis is why I want to be able to write down things. For some reason I have very bad memory (basically, I can only remember the last 24 hours, but usually nto even that) so I wish I could write stuff down so everything I do is not wasted.So I'm jealous that you guys are able to do that, I wish I could too.
I'm curious, why can't you write?
Poetry, for example, isn't really about being a 'good' writer, it's more about what you're 'feeling' in the moment and it really doesn't matter if it's considered 'good' by anyone else; it belongs to you and you alone, and it doesn't matter what anyone else thinks about it.
Please don't be jealous of me. I am pretty horrific at using words to paint a picture.I can't say I feel any release. I don't really put "emotion" into it. Things just come and I write them. Sure there may be "inspiration" but, it just sorta comes to me.I suck at it quite honestly >.<
I write and do poetry too. Same reason as you to express my feelings. But I feel that I really express myself through dance. Doesn't matter which type either. But poetry is a great way.
me. i have a few on my site and i have tried to write a few songs. one ry found and liked and was workign with me to put music to it but... we just dropped it kinda. (others well i attepted i don't think there all that great lol) but i'd rather draw anyway. i had therpist that let me bring him my drawings and poems and then we sometimes talked about them.
ben poem don't have to make since to anyone but u. i have some (as drawings too) that no one has put their eyes on. this is my EIEIO poem that makes no since at all. it has no point.. i was just bored...then i thoguth it was kinda funny.EIEIO sat on a toad.EIEIO made a peepee on the road.EIEIO ran down the road with the toad.EIEIO , said EIEIO.A car hit his toad!EIEIO made a pee pee on the car in the road that was on his toad.poor EIEIO's toad.
*giggle* :grin:
I was never very good at poetry, I think to hard when it comes to writing it. I'm more of a story writer. I'm on Chapter 8 right now of my book... who knows some day I might actually finish it lol. Though I am not expecting it to ever be published it would just be a nice accomplishment to know I finished something so large.
Forgive me for reposting in an old thread, but...Have you found something of yours yet? I'd like to read it, if you don't mind. Maybe I could post something of mine afterwards as well? And to Ntroducing - good luck on your book! I'm working on one as well.
